Go Gently
By thanksfortheparakeets@gmail.com
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What do you see, a feeble figure? Urinating in the bed
Brittle ribs fractured by resuscitation. Plastic and alien, all tubes and beeping.
Do you see a dirty word? The incessant niggle; the twinge we cannot master.
The final insult; we have conquered the sky and analysed the atom
Crying “not so!” at the night and making prayers of clinical intervention.
Perhaps you see piteous vulnerability? A man reduced to babyhood.
Frightening and jolting; you are soothed by miracles of policy and procedure.
I am looking too. I see a strong and dignified man
Dressed simply for the journey in hat and cape and calm repose.
His packed bag waits. And there, now look, the cage is ajar
Two white birds;
One for all his loves, one for all his losses. They are starting to sing
Fluttering, stirring
Preparing to take flight.
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I've just discovered your
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I really like this and: His
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Sorry I came to this late,
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Hello xx l can identity with
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This is stunning. Turned the
This is stunning. Turned the mainstream view on its head and given death the gift of symbolism. Very moved by your work and hope you don't mind me keep popping up here and there!
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A gentle retort to Dylan
A gentle retort to Dylan Thomas? A compassionate view, hopeful too. Very moving, in an understated way.
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