I LOVE YOU, RIGHT ?

By moonphish

Fri, 12 May 2017
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i'm at the age when things regress
i've pulled back in my head
and tend to think of days of yore
than yesterday, instead
.
sometimes my recollections
may be far apart and few
but if i say, "i love you, right ?"
please indicate i do
.
the path ahead seems very short
the road behind, so long
with many fields of flowers
that my mind might dwell among
.
please pull me forward from the past
to share a present tense
and if i say, "i love you, right ?"
just nod, so it makes sense
.
the years of late are spinning wild
at almost lightning speed
a grasp of concentricity
is something that i need
.
so bring me to the moment
so a union, we'll fulfill
and if i say, "i love you, right ?"
please say, "you always will"
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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

This poem is so well created. I love it Alvin.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much Jenny

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

This seems very sweet, especially if it connects with the photo. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks Rhiannon...glad you enjoyed