Thoughts Of An Adolescent
By nika_cheeks
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A/N- N stands for narration and T stands for thoughts.
N-The girl is standing infront of her full length mirror
T-Arghh! Why wont this spot go away. TV IS A LIAR, clearasil does NOT work! What on earth am I going to do, James gets here in 15, no 10 minutes. Crap! Okay, focus, he won't notice and even if he does it won't matter. He likes me for me, I hope.
N-The spot is on the tip of her nose, red and pussy from squeezing, it stands out like a beacon
T-Cover all concealer, ay. I don't think so. Why is my hair so greasy, it looks like I washed it in chip fat. Eugh, chip fat. I should've gone on a diet. I'll start tomorrow.
N-She pulls on her dress still looking in the mirror
T-Sugar! Dress is too tight, should've started that diet last week. Scrub that, tight is good,it shows off curves. Which I don't have.
N-Door bell rings, it's James. Her parents start the 'talk'. She runs down the stairs to save him and trips down the steps.
T-What are they staring at? Okay, so I fell down the stairs. No harm done. (Apart from the ache on my bum, I fell on it.)
N-James reaches out to help her. Asking if she's alright at the same time.
T-So now he wants to help. Stuff it, I don't know why I spent all this time getting ready. Should've known I'd mess it up. Can't get much worse. Should I ask if we're going now?
N-"You ready to go?" James asks and offers his arm. She takes it and doesn't say a word.
T-I swear that boy can read my mind at times.
A/N- sorry if it was awkward to read.
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I think it might work better
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