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-Get in there son! big Simon said to the young lad. Big Simon was the
young lad's section Corporal. They were in the red light district of
Hannover, Germany. He was pushing him into the room of an African
prostitute big Simon had named Liz. Before pulling the door shut on
them big Simon had given money and instructions to her. He had said
"the usual". Liz knew what that meant. It meant anal sex. She had
experienced him and his new additions inside her several times before.
He was good business for her and though she despised him she never let
it show. It was the job she told herself: only a means to an end.
Big Simon had given her fifty deutschmarks. He and four others had
contributed ten deutschmarks each. It was for the young lad's
initiation to Germany. His name was Ian. They had changed it to
Snudge.
-Enjoy yourself young Snudger, Simon shouted to Ian from behind the
closed door. He then turned to Ginge, Whitey, Dug and Winston. They all
laughed.
-To the pub then lads, big Simon said.
-I'll be there shortly, said Dug. -First, I'm going to pay a vist to
the lovely Marsha. Marsha was an oriental prostitute. She worked in
Thai alley. He had named her the lovely Marsha, after his bosses' wife,
who he wanted to ride.
-You've been to Thai alley twice the day already for fucks sakes man,
said Winston. His real name was Richard but because he was originally
from Jamaica he was nicknamed Winston. Big Simon had labelled him it.
Richard didn't like it to begin with but it had stuck nonetheless. Now
everybody called him it, including the sergeant majors and the
officers. He had grown to like it. He had been called worse in the
past.
-Not the lovely Marsha I ain't, said Dug. -I've been saving myself for
her. She was busy earlier when I went round but I told Bing to tell her
I'd be round now. Bing was Marsha's brothel neighbour. They didn't have
a clue what their real names were. They just made them up as they went
along. They were just the ones who became regulars and their names just
stuck, like Winston's. Bing was also a favourite of big Simon's.
-Tell the dirty little slapper I'll be round shortly, said big Simon
to Dug.
-I'm sure she'll look forward to it, Dug replied. They both laughed.
They knew fine well she wouldn't. Big Simon was an ugly, scary looking
guy who didn't care much for women. He now saw them as nothing more
than a piece of meat to be paid and fucked. That was why he enjoyed
Germany so much with its legal brothels. That was why he had never had
a girlfriend since he had been there.
While the rest of the lads made their way to the Brit pub and Dug made
his way towards Thai alley, Ian stood there looking and feeling like
the prostitute virgin he was. He watched nervously while the African
prostitute undressed. She was stood there naked except for a lace top
that barely concealed her large breasts. And although he could see
through her top, if he wanted to suck on them he would have to pay an
extra ten deutschmarks.
-Undress, she said to him.
He began to immediately. What would Katie say or do if she found out
about this? he thought to himself. Katie was his girlfriend of two
years. She was waiting to go to university while Ian joined the army.
And although Ian was convinced he loved Katie he was becoming aroused
as he watched the prostitute. Her voluptuous body turned him on. He
stood there naked, waiting and wondering what to do next. He was
aroused now and contemplated playing with himself as he watched her
apply the lotion to the crack of her arse. He was somewhat surprised to
find himself not at all embarrassed by the fact that he was naked and
erect. The atmosphere in the room was peaceful and the prostitute had
seen it all before. He had no reason to feel tense. In the corner of
the room was a stereo. It was playing music he had not heard before. It
helped make the atmosphere what it was. He looked back to her who had
finished with the lotion. She caught his eye.
-You like? she said to him. She was bent over in front of him. Her
behind was high in the air. She slapped her right hand on to it. It
landed on the tattoo on her right buttock cheek. Ian caught his breath
and confidently nodded his approval. His erection was now swelling. She
laughed at him and Ian laughed back. He was sure she liked him. What
Ian didn't see was that her eyes contradicted her expression. They held
contempt for him. Ian was too young to register this. He was sure she
liked him. He thought everyone liked him.
She moved towards him slowly. The whole time she scanned his face.
Watching him devour her body she saw the same eager and hungry eyes
that she had seen on countless occasions. To her they were all the
same. She hated men.
His eyes took in all of her body as she slowly walked towards him.
What hips, breasts, he thought to himself excitedly&;#8230; and the
breasts&;#8230; Ian was very excited. He had now forgotten where he
was. He knew he would enjoy her. His eyes moved from the coarse black
between her legs to the large brown breasts that were on show through
her transparent lace top. His eyes stopped on the nipples. They were
large and a darker shade of brown than the rest of the breast. Through
her top she played with them for him. She squeezed them between her
long red-painted fingertips.
-You like, she said again. He indicated his approval with a confident
grin this time. His eyes were mesmerized by her actions. She moved
closer to him taking her hands from her breasts as she did so. She
placed both of them on his erection and she left enough room between
them for him to see. His eyes did not leave her hands.
-You like, she sang this time, pulling him by his penis close against
her. Her chest was against his chest. Her mouth was close to but not
touching his ear. She exhaled her hot breath on to it. Ian placed his
hands onto her behind. He liked her large behind. He caressed it all
over. His erection rested against her stomach. He firmly grabbed her
behind and pulled her to him even tighter, the whole time squeezing his
erection against her stomach. He wanted her now and he knew she wanted
him.
She pushed him back by his penis with a violent action. He removed his
hands from her backside and looked at her. She eyeballed him seriously
before breaking into a smile. She began to masturbate him with both her
hands rapidly. She'd had him worried for a second. He closed his eyes
as she pulled at his penis. He didn't touch her. His hands were by his
sides. He was trying to prevent himself from ejaculating. He was trying
to recite the alphabet backwards in his mind. It wasn't working. He
thought he was about to come. She sensed this and stopped. Using his
penis as a lead she led him to the bed. It had no duvet like Ian's but
only a dark red sheet covering the mattress. She let his penis go and
climbed onto the bed where she lay on her back, her legs spread wide
open. Her breasts fell to her sides. He stared at them. He wondered why
she had not removed her top. He really wanted to have them in his
mouth. He had never seen such a large pair of breasts before let alone
sucked on them. He really wanted to suck on them.
She beckoned him forward.
He went to her eagerly. This was it he thought. He had completely
forgotten about Katie and where he was. He knelt onto the bed and
crawled his way between her legs. He was there. This was it.
She masterfully put the condom on him. She felt his penis pulsate in
her hands. She wanted to snap it in two like a twig. This was the
moment she despised. On rolling it completely down his shaft she placed
both her hands on it firmly and again used it like a weapon to push him
away. The force of her push yanked his head away from her chest. He had
almost had her breasts out of her top and into his mouth. In a split
second she had turned herself over onto all fours and manoeuvred his
penis inside her anus. He was shocked at first. She sensed his surprise
and thrust herself backwards and into him deeper. She had stopped him
from withdrawing. She took his hands and placed them on her breasts.
There was a momentary pause until he realised where his hands were. He
removed her top and began to play with them. She let him. He began to
thrust himself in and out of her. He had never experienced it so tight
before. It would not be long after till he came and she bled. The whole
experience had lasted less than the fifteen minutes his friends had
paid for. He got dressed silently while she washed and prepared for the
next customer. He said good-bye. She didn't respond. He was sure she
had enjoyed it. She hated her life.