Beach
By Pingles
Sun, 31 May 2026
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Startled, the castle collapses,
Cast a last receeding look
Toward the sea,
Coils of white that cross the blackened shore-
Then turn back to the shadow
Calling out already from the dune-
A thicker cloud passes,
You shiver and pick up your shoes.
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Beach.
I liked this. Call it erosion, build a castle another day.
Regards
ScoZen
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Intimations of something else
Intimations of something else here. Nicely suggested. ![]()
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