The Brook
By rickcysky
Mon, 15 Aug 2011
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I slithered through unwelcome flurries,
musing on those bitter worries
darkest winter always seems to bring.
Although the weather had impeded,
all my mental pains receded
when a plucky brook began to sing.
Beside encroaching gloomy snows
it battled through the stubborn floes
imparting, 'Well, I'll do just what I can.
If I can trickle doggedly,
despite the ice that threatens me
there's still a scrap of hope for you, young man.'
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Hi rickcysky, this is great,
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Hi rickcysky,
this is great, I liked the positive end. Really enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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Brilliant - love the
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Brilliant - love the 'plucky brook' line especially and the metre is great, thanks for sharing I really enjoyed this! :)
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