I Brought It To You
By Shannan
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I Brought It To You
Rare treasures of creativity,
refined pearls of my mind,
the condensation of my soul,
in dew-dropped letters.
Neat,
crisp, clean,
captured on this page.
Holding my moment,
My being,
My excitement,
My glee.
Half a page
of my poetry.
I brought it to you:
My pirate’s treasure,
Rescued
from the depths
of my being;
Retrieved,
through ink and time,
battle and rhyme.
My inner treasure hunt;
and I found the jewels
held in my heart, my chest,
now displayed under protection,
on this page.
Each stanza rich in passion,
in the sparkling beauty of newfound creation.
I brought it to you.
“Look at what I found,
hidden in the depths
of my being.
I’m so excited.
Please won’t you read.”
“That’s nice my angel.
Maybe later, sweetheart.
I’m busy now.”
Convicted pirate.
Silent torture.
Drop the pen.
Burn the paper.
There’s no such thing
as treasure
anyway.
Bury it.
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Clever description of the
Clever description of the excitement. So sad! but it happens, we have to accept we're operating on different wavelengths sometimes, and have to 'try again', realise the other person is in the middle of coping with different thoughts and hasn't tuned in to the need? And that some of these inner excitements can't always be understood by anyone else, even when written down.
(Though the Holy Spirit understands us!) Rhiannon
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