"dominates all" -tanka

By T. Imaan Tretchicovmanicova

Fri, 12 Aug 2022
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the round, quiet moon
whips across the silent sky;
a sweet, demure dress.
master moon dominates all
seduce the twinkling, he does.

© t. imaan tretchicovmanicova 
09aug2022

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Noir

Comments

Submitted by Tom Brown on

She silently rages, Dylan Thomas spoke of - in my craft or sullen art practiced when only the moon rages.

You are in good company! Tom

 

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Thank you Tom for your wonderful feedback.

My body of work is dedicated to my alpha parents, entire family & to you may it awaken. © T. Imaan Tretchicovmanicova