Requited Love
By theonetheson
Thu, 15 Apr 2010
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Such beauty you have, you amaze me
aroused by your sultry sexy ways
cloud nine is my mind when I am with you.
although in only brief moments limited
so grateful I am for such serendipitous encounters
Sublime, an adjective inadequate to describe you
divine, resplendent come closer
adequate verbiage I struggle to find
desperate to feel you, longing to touch you
Yearning to have you lying close,
in my arms enveloped in warm affection
I wait patiently...
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I really like the structure
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I really like the structure of this one and especially these lines:
'Sublime, an adjective inadequate to describe you
divine, resplendent come closer
adequate verbiage I struggle to find'
Oh and welcome to ABC! ;)
Magic xxx
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