Pop Art Kite

By tibi popovici

Mon, 09 Feb 2015

4 comments

1 likes

Dog, barking, live
Fly, bird, dead
Boeing made, kite

The wind blows, dirt
Cover mouth, gets in eye
Girls wear skirt

Eyes large, shame
Dropped, the kite
Feel lame

Dog, barking, mad
Kite fly, dead
Heaven laughing, sad

Children run, lost
Girls, hide feet
Keeping skirts, off

Crazy bird, pays
The wind sings, dust
I, amazed
Remain rust.

Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on Mon, 2015-02-09 09:36

I love the sensations of kite flying that this poem creates, the jerky pace relfects that stop start of kite flying, ups and downs.

Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on Mon, 2015-02-09 09:46

Thanks Philip!

It's great that we sharing the same sensation

Tiberiu

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Mon, 2015-02-09 20:31

Each word takes on a constant change of direction as with the wind.

Very much liked.

Bee

Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on Mon, 2015-02-09 20:48

Thanks Bee!

I also apreciate so much your work.

Tiberiu