When dreams are not enough

By tibi popovici

Sun, 08 Feb 2015
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When dreams are not enough

Then you need to wake up!
But that means dreams are not reality.
Why? Because reality can't make you fly?

Ok, so let be dreams only!
Then, how you know you are dreaming?
If there is no reality to wake you up...
I prefer dreams from reality!
That sounds weird, isn't it?

We need to try again.
I prefer reality from dreams!
That could be even wrong.

Hmmm, is there any reality, after all?
Or dreams are the real side of reality?
So then, why do you need to wake up?

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Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Life is but a dream...

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Yeah, that could make sense. Others can argue that dream is part of life..., not vice versa.

But, after all, what's the fun of dreaming without being real? smiley

Thanks Philip

Submitted by Bee on

Dreams are fascinating, and there are some fascinating thoughts in your poem, too. You might want to read it through again to check for a few typos, though. I'm only saying that because I like it, and if it was mine, I'd want to get this one just right. 

Sometimes, I wish I never had to wake up and could just live in dreams - except horrible ones, of course. Liked reading your poem.

Bee

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks Bee for you feedback!

I am trying my best, but because English is my second language, sometimes can be a pain. smiley

Tiberiu

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I enjoyed this poem and agree with Bee so much. Dreams take you away to other worlds, they're inspiring and give you the chance of adventures without even moving from your bed.

Much food for thought here.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks a lot Jenny!

Agreed with all of you, dreams must be the substance of life. Treat them carefully! smiley

Tiberiu