Alive

By well-wisher
Fri, 18 May 2012
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I imagine being revived by your kiss time and time again; struggling forth from underwater; almost drowned but not dead and then kissing you; a bubble bursting between our lips, or running out of a house on fire with my clothes all covered in flame and kissing you with bright, hot lips or, having been choked of air, kissing you; a kiss of life breathing air back into me or, having bitten into a poisoned apple, like Snow White, my eyes opening again at the touch of your lips, for there is something within your kiss that is like the essence of living; like the shock of a defibrillator to my heart and only when I kiss you do I feel truly alive.
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And I feel truly 'alive'
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
And I feel truly 'alive' after reading this. Wonderfully put;-)
Tina
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A beautiful, compact little
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A beautiful, compact little piece! Love that final line, well done on the cherries ;-)
Magic xxx
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