Blunt Instrument

By Ewan
Sun, 09 Aug 2009
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Show me your values,
print them in child-like letters.
Leave me punch drunk with the obvious.
Persuasion or propaganda
is pointless, it seems.
Draw us your beliefs -
in black-and-white, of course -
lead us, nose first, through the simplest
argument and accentuate
the asinine, please.
Explain your dogma,
one thumb-rule at a time.
Make no allowance for tolerance:
browbeaten and bullied, we
will believe - or else.
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it seems. please. or else. I
it seems.
please.
or else.
I loved the idea behind this piece Ewan, different and imaginative. I liked the layout aswell however, those three endings ^ up there made the layout for me.
Just a message to let you know, you're a good writer and I might not post much on your pieces, but I do read them.
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I think it's called
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
I think it's called evolution! Very good ;)
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