'The Journey' by Joshua Castelino (Age 8 )
By Conan.White
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I Have been through drastic measures to find my lonely lost Frozen brother.Starjik has send his deadly wolves to me, but I ran and climbed a fir tree then a bear came and drove them away, later in my ferocious adventure I found the beastly bear was a old woman, when I dug my first snow dirt, I saw my brother as I inched towards him he kept the same distance, then I knew it was a illusion. I realized that Starjik did not want me to be Warm.
He wanted me to Freeze to Death.I could not find my snowdrift then a glossy glistening yellow eyed snowy owl,who was the same old woman who lead me to my nice warm hot cosy snowdrift came,I was really thank full. On my way to ice palace,I saw a glowing crystal, light fire, some people came and said come today eat in a joyful feast but it instantly disappeared in a dark , big dangerous hole,it was Starjik cruel trick, he said are you listening to me Joshua, ok on my way I found the old joyful woman she gave me my tears, cried for my brother, she said throw this in his face and say,"This brothers never more shall part melt the winter in his heart. When I reached the desolated place, I asked beastly ferocious Starjik where my brother was he said he Dead,later he gave up Arguing and told me where he was, there were all the children in a Ice crystal, back of Ice".
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It is absolutely amazing!
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