The Human Condition

By awsamy

Sat, 02 Jul 2011
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When did our innocence corrupt,
which once distinguished us from the beasts,
is the beast not a man made creation,
for our manifestations of hate,
the fear of the fear itself,
the spiralling indignation,
that once separated us from them,
and them from us,
mirrored,
we are all God's creations,
and so are we not all equal,
equally bad,
equally good,
equally human.

Certificate 15
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, awsamy. I like this;-) One tiny point - you need an apostrophe after god. Ie. god's creations. Much to think about here, and very eloquently put. I like these lines in particular:- 'the fear of the fear itself, the spiralling indignation, that once separated us from them...' Tina

 

Submitted by awsamy on
aww thankyou very much :) im glad you enjoyed reading it :) xx