A clear autumn afternoon

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 26 Oct 2012
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The fog has lifted,
autumn colours glow and warm,
crisp, crunchy footfall on the ground,
then far away glint pale grey silhouettes
– Welsh hills against the golden clouds,
and slanting rays of light from roof of lowering grey,
as afternoon approaches evening still and clear.

Certificate U
Poem
Countryside explorations
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
This is a lovely view to have Rhiannon. You described it well. ;)Pia

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
thank you, Pia. I'm quicker in my appreciation after a few foggy days! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thank you, Bear, it felt good to be able to capture the lovely scenes. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I know what you mean about that fog and mist, Rhiannon, it was so glorious to see the sun rise this morning whilst I drank my cuppa;-) Your poem captured, admirably, what I saw too, except for the Welsh hills, of course. Very much enjoyed. Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Thank you, Tina. Glad you are having another lovely sunny morning too. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Ah, wonder where you're seeing them from! Glad you enjoyed my little note about these pleasures, as you say noticed when the fog/clouds lift. Thanks. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a beautiful picture of a wonderful view Rhiannon, fair took my breath away. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
One of those days when the weather clears after fog, and you really appreciate the colours again and the view. Thank you for commenting. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

Another lovely descriptive poem - of autumn and the weather and a general feeling of good will.

Jean

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

That's a nice comment, Jean. Thank you. Rhiannon