Villanelle
By Higgins
Fri, 16 Nov 2012
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The clocks are ticking, on and on,
but still I should not lose my head:
My soul and thoughts will soon be gone.
Yet still I´m waiting here so long;
and why do I feel thin like thread?
The clocks are ticking, on and on.
I feel a headache growing strong,
perhaps the future makes me dread?
My soul and thoughts will soon be gone-
I generally just feel so wrong,
it even makes me see all red -
The clocks are ticking, on and on.
I slowly even hear a song,
while to a house in dreams I´m led.
My soul and thoughts will soon be gone
And now I hear the bells! Ding Dong!
It seems that I will soon be dead!
The clocks are ticking! On and on!
My soul and thoughts will soon be gone!
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I like the structure of this
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
I like the structure of this one Higgins. A good solid piece. Should "lead" be "led" in the penultimate stanza?
Parson Thru
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