Stay up forever
By andrew-evans
Tue, 23 Apr 2013
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Just a few steps behind,
in the shade of your shadow.
right by your side,
whenever you need me.
I will be here
when you're sad and lonely
I'll be here
when you're on top of the world.
Even if my eyes get heavy
and my breathing slows,
and the claws
of tiredness
latch onto my skin,
to console you,
comfort you,
I will stay up
with you forever.
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Well done with this. I think
Well done with this. I think it works very well - simple, straightforward and not a word out of place.
Rob
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beautiful, ditto Rob.
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
beautiful, ditto Rob.
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Highlighting the deeper
Highlighting the deeper committments of love well. Rhiannon
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Loved all the sentiments
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Loved all the sentiments behind this poem.
Great read.
Jenny.
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