Haiku-2

By Basket case

Sat, 14 Feb 2015
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5 comments
 

Letters come together, lying on the white paper, lining up to speak.

Certificate 12
Poem
Haiku
Love

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Love how you've put this together in one line.  They become the very letters you write about.  Tiny and wonderful.

Submitted by Basket case on

Thanks, glad you like it.

I love  poetry and love letters, so i just trying to be the letter to tell how i feel when i was writing smiley

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

This one line really leaves an impression.

I love the idea, too.

I don't really know much about haiku, other than what's come down from reading Jack Kerouac, who seemed to love it.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Basket case on

Thanks you love it.

I don't know much about it too, I just learned it form an American and I love this way to wrtie a poem. 

Also, i don't really know much about Jack Kerouac, as I am a chinese, an Art student, so, i amnot a real writer, but i would like to read more and write more, thankssmiley

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Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on

Nice.  Like the way the letters - language itself - is brought to life and personified here, and the surprising visual imagery that this one conjured.  Apologies for being a bit late to the comments game - randomly surfing ABC tales and finding stuff right now :)