In Case You Don't Remember

Cherry

By Bee

Fri, 23 Oct 2015
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13 comments
 

Found you; curled against you
where you rested, soundly
on Deserted Beach.

You were just aware, I think,
unfolded, mildly smiling
in amongst the dogs that soaked
the sun around you lazing
on the sand.

Not a bark, or growl, they opened
sleepy windows and sniffed as if to say,
You again! then shifted up
to let me in;

didn't seem to mind me 
fading in and out from time
to time; allowed my keep returning
to the spot. And then

awake, I left you where you sighed,
and dreamt yourself to bed.
I say all of this

incase you don't remember,
but now I think you will do, even though
I tried to not disturb you -
too much, love.

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Comments

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

This is lovely and peaceful and full of content. I hope your treatment went well yesterday. I was thinking about you.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

Hi Jean. 

It went well, feeling a bit sick today, but not too bad so far. Your thoughts mean so much to me. Thank you for them, and for your lovely comments. 

Bee

Submitted by Starfish Girl on

A very restful and soothing piece, with lovely images. As Jean says our thoughts are with you.

Take care

Lindy

Submitted by Bee on

Pleased you found it soothing, Lindy. And thank you,

Bee

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Lovely sleepy piece.  Hope you're relaxed and resting.

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Philip.

x

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

This is surreal - I wondered if perhaps it was the ghost of someone visiting a loved one.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Bee on

Hi AE. It could be, couldn't it?

x

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you for the cherriessmiley

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Bee - this is euphoric.  Love the analogy of the dogs, and you have described it so well... their nonchalance and acceptance, that I can actually visualise them, making the imagery even more powerful.

Hope you're feeling OK today. Thinking of you.

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Tina. I'm really pleased he dogs added something. And thank you so much for your kind thoughts, too. They really do get me through. 

Bee

Submitted by VeraClark on

I felt this was you nudging an ex lover, shaking up the past full of love, taking the intimacy to a shared daydream. Anyway, it's soft and gentle enough to be bounced around in. Really serene.

 

Submitted by Bee on

Glad you found it gentle. Love the idea of bouncing around in a daydream. 

Thanks Vera.

Bee