Say That Again...(Poetry Monthly)
By Silver Spun Sand
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The repetition here is
The repetition here is certainly effective, Tina. And getting into the multitude of such diverse reasons that might be given, with the twist at the end. I take it it's all about 'joining up' with the armed forces? Rhiannon
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Been thinking, Tina. Would be
Been thinking, Tina. Would be quite a challenge too to tackle explaining the thinking of those who join up for more straightforward reasons of defending, but still recognise the difficulties of the job? And who, reluctantly, are willing for their children to do so. Actually, I think you have touched on that somewhen else. Rhiannon
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Effective is right. This is
Effective is right. This is wonderful, Tina.
Rich
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Hi Tina,
Hi Tina,
you always know how to express yourself on any subject, the rewards are that there's no poem you can't tackle, as with this clever piece of writing.
Jenny.
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Good to hear from you, as
Good to hear from you, as well, Tina. My presence has been somewhat sparadic over the last, but it's nice to be reading again.
Rich x
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