Chanter - (poetry monthly)
 
  
By EB
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tripping all
	about the blackened lake the manic
	trees and spears 
	of grass with frossy heads 
	you send me 
	every morning walking 
	beasts with smiling teeth and me 
	dug deep in silted beds rescued
	by a wild redeath 
	while you you slap my frozen hand 
	
	and drag my still unwilling spirit 
	from a mote of famished maggots to the bridge 
	a palm against my folding shoulder's
	child I trust in
	mirrored skies while with a smoked out
	voice a-choke I sob and plead
	I only have a ceiling and the sharp reminders
	of the changeless view you send
	me darkened days of creeping through the deep
	unseeing trees the spears 
	of grass that stab the frossy heads 
	the beasts with dripping teeth and me 
	
	dug deep in silted beds a persevering hand 
	back at the edge of sanity's
	cold steely eyes a visor on the mirror skies 
	that shimmer high below my closing ceiling 
	flashbacks of the lake inspire deep
	desired sightlessness of trees spears aloft 
	the angry grass still dances
	tossed white frossy heads
	tripping all
	about the blooded lake where Kitty lies
	her mouth an O and clouded eyes 
	open wide forever 
	chanting 
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There is something gothic and
There is something gothic and macabre growing bigger here as you read, the merge of frozen nature and frozen child (perhaps child, I dont know) You create a stark tableau.Great use of repetition, I think this is beautiful.
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This chilling poem with
This chilling poem with wonderful use of repetition is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Get a great reading recommendation most days
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Accolades well deserved, EB.
Accolades well deserved, EB. You've done Poetry Monthly proud...and some.
Tina
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