Lost Innocence By Jav Bond

By JavBond

Tue, 30 May 2017
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Diana Lorenzo Day, a girl who's been abused, tortured and has no where to go after her parents' death. But soon she enrolls herself into California College of Arts and Crafts to continue her life normally or to make people seem like she is from normal circumstances.There she meets Sean Mccallister Knight a bad boy who tries to play tough and a flirt even though like others, he has many secrets and holds them close so no one knows. When they both meet, will they let their guards down, let each other know what the other hides and help the other come out of it and even possibly like each other or will their cold nature make them dislike each other even further?

Certificate 12
Story
Drama

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Hello Jav and welcome to ABCTales! I think something might have gone wrong - there's no actual text. Are you having problems with submitting it?

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

ah- ok. You might want to wait a bit, until you have an actual story before posting, otherwise people will miss it. When things are published on ABCTales they go in the 'new' section, which is what everyone sees. As they get older, they get pushed further down the 'new' section as other pieces are posted. Prose tends to be posted in parts so people can see there's a new chapter - so perhaps wait til you have eg 1000 words, make that 'part 1', then wait until you have another 1000 words and publish it as 'part 2'' and so on and so forth

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

On the right hand column, click on 'write a story or poem'. For the title, if it's a continuation of 'Lost Innocence', call it something like 'Lost Innocence Part 2'. You don't need to put your name as that will automatically appear underneath anything you submit. You can also create a 'collection' (you will see this option when you click on 'write a story or poem' ) - so if you make one called 'Lost Innocence', then everyone who follows this story will be able to see the whole collection of chapters as you write the piece.

If you look at celticman's work, for example, and how he arranges all his different pieces, you will see how it's done.

Hope that helps!