Aqua
By Parson Thru
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The wash
bowls us over
Lost
underfoot
Down-side-up
Tumbling through
swaying kelp
whose arms
blindly reach to touch
Soft and
abstract
Thoughts of
upper-world on hold
till normal
service is resumed
Perhaps
Fat liquid sounds
ingratiate
and beckon
Familiar
and inviting
Presence
overhauls perception
lifting worldly-weariness
and leaving
peace
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There's a lovely sense of
There's a lovely sense of release in this fluid piece.
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smoove
favorite line
Presence
overhauls perception
The concept of perception being reality always troubles me
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Good to be in the moment.
Good to be in the moment. Great work, economy of words works well and lovely word combinations throughout 'swaying kelp' / 'fat liquid sounds' / 'down-side-up' - all little touches that make it very much your own expression, which is the best thing. Washes fluidly to a lifting ending. Enjoyed
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