Liffey Swim

By Stickleback

Mon, 24 Dec 2018
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No parting crowds
Only darkness
Eternity to the bay
Swimming out
From bright harbour light
Yearning sanctuary

Like some contrite cetacean
In the night
Of a dark ocean
The bitter taste of brine
Fallen stars
The only
Aids to navigation

 

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Certificate U
Poem
The Anvil Earth

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

There's a lovely atmosphere created here but perhaps a little tightening up would aid meaning.