Left Behind 2

By Richard L. Provencher

Thu, 06 Jun 2019
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Flitting in ecstasy

a young hummingbird

quick as lightning

bolts from flower to feeder

 

a scent- carrying beauty

spites the lateness

of a colourful autumn day.

Winter’s too soon

on the edge of seasons.

 

Go South little bird.

 

 

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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

I felt this 2nd version deserved a stature of its own. Don't be shy to tell me which one you prefer.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I don't know which I prefer, Richard. Both are attractive. But I hope the little bird doesn't get left behind! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you, Rhiannonw. Now you know the quandry I was in.  

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Submitted by Tom Brown on

Very nice Richard! I think of an Elvis song of the "little snowbird".

Go South little bird! Just hang on just not yet!

Tom Brown

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Merci, Tom. We really enjoy  the birdies on our back apartment porch -- mostly chick-a-dees / sparrows / humming birds, juncos and moaning doves (my name for them). Of course the portly.pidgeons like to waddle over and snaggle some feed.

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Submitted by Tom Brown on

Hi Richard! I know many people in Canada speak French is it an official language? Are there not perhaps more mother language speakers than are English speaking?

Lots of people emigrated there most of them were not happy many came back. It seems the best place from South Africa is Australia few return to SA.

Salut!