Fishing with dad
By Daniel Saint-John
Sat, 28 Jul 2012    
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    It is cold and I am sleepy.
A moonless sky
shines above our head,
a slow sun climbing its way up
from down deep in the horizon.
The smell of living trout
lives in the river,
a fall spits water through razor rocks,
froth bustles here and there.
To fish your first fish,
my father says,
is like kissing your first kiss.
Something to remember forever.
I will only remeber those words.
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This is quite touching. I
    Permalink    Submitted by Jessiibear on   
  This is quite touching. I enjoyed it a lot. 
Remeber should be: remember, but it's barely passable as an excuse to reject this piece. For me, anyway. Thanks for posting. :)
Jess <3
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Don't apologize for the
    Permalink    Submitted by Jessiibear on   
  Don't apologize for the typo! It happens. :)
And your welcome.
Jess <3
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