Starward Flung Spears


By Ewan
Mon, 05 Nov 2018
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Starward flung spears fall
un-noticed into the sea.
Salt water fizz subsides
into dark, polluted brooding.
We think of escape
to planets red or dead moons.
The tides are stopping,
choked by carbon-chained molecules:
we dream, we dream, and God laughs
thunder and cries floods of acid tears
until we leave no more behind us
than Ozymandias, King of Things.
Look on our waste ye foolish and despair
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Hi,
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Hi,
I liked this elegy on the waste we leave behind. Also the allusion to Ozymandias gave the poem gravitas.
Hilary
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Gorgeous first sentence
Permalink Submitted by Stephen Thom on
Gorgeous first sentence lovely diction throughout & sense of frustration
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