Ebony Sun

By aardvark1500

Wed, 05 Nov 2008
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My tormented soul,
Lying at the base of the eternal chasm.
The Cimmerii calling out to me:
The Ebony Sun

Crying softly,
I stifle my screams hiding my true self.
The dirt hard beneath me burning:
The Ebony Sun

The hazy heartache,
Squeezing my splintering soul into darkness.
The dead march rings in my mind:
The Ebony Sun

Mourning silence,
Reminding me of my worthless life.
A light of nothingness fills my corpse:
The Ebony Sun

Certificate PG
Poetry
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
Love: 'Squeezing my splintering soul into darkness' and: 'Mourning silence' stand out as superb lines amongst others that feel a little forced. Good 'pain-writing' is always upsetting but purging also. Don't gve in!

 

Submitted by aardvark1500 on
Thanks very much, it's always nice to get positive feedback. Aard