Beating around the bush

By Deliberately Evolving

Sat, 22 Aug 2015
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Beating around the bush

 
The consequence of the outcome 
and the upshot of the out-turn 
ended up a sequel from events,
based upon the eventual reaction,
culminated into repercussions on
several sets of ramifications
and in the end at the conclusion
and the ultimate termination,
created prolonged reverberations,
that resulted in the end. 
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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

And an end is often a good place to start. Your poem seems to have brought you full circle in events that sound to have been a learning curve. Very well worded. I like this piece a lot.

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Cheers Bee. :-)

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I'm not usually able to stop by much on a Sunday, but this caught my eye, AE, and I did enjoy trying to catch up with your word twisting. I'm sure you enjoyed getting it together? Any hope of a different word for one of the reverberations ? Just a challenge! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Rhiannon, I think I need to start sending my poems for you to check over before I post them. I usually write really late at night when I'm really sleepy and can't see my phone well (I have tiny kids though and late night is usually the only time I get).

 

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

It was nice to see another long 'r' word inserted! You do very well considering the time restraints and busy time. Time and again I suddenly see something about a verse I hadn't noticed whether typo or repetition I hadn't meant etc! Rhiannon