Vacation
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Tue, 27 Sep 2011
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I walk along the skirt
Of a lake untouched
By melancholy reality
I cup my hands
Brimmed with water pure
And drain my face of the smog
Still clinging to eyelashes
And the grease
Still smudging at features
My face purified
I wonder
At the pool pristine
I rise
Slowly to savor
And I flood lungs
with air so crisp
It cuts at my throat
And in this moment
Of divinity
Of purity
Of destiny
My imperfect shoe rebels
And slips against rock
I fall
A suspended symbol
Of everything that is
But should not be
And I slip
Into perfect depths
And I flail
But cannot swim
And I cry
But cannot be heard
And I sink
I drown
Swallowed by the loveliness
Of the unblemished world
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what an amazing poem...but
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
what an amazing poem...but with such a sad ending.
I loved your descriptions of:-
I cup my hands
Brimmed with water pure
And drain my face of the smog
Still clinging to eyelashes
And the grease
Still smudging at features
I could visualize everything in this poem and I
just loved the words you used. I loved the poem
very much as a whole.
Thankyou for sharing.
Jenny.
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