‘Some Days’

By Art of the Diver

Fri, 19 Jun 2015
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‘Some Days’

 

Some days

I feel so sad that I forget

to look beyond myself and see

the sadness of the real world,

with its dying natural beauty

 

Polluted, raped and ruined

No respect, nor genuine regret

On those some days…

I always hear nature crying alone

and feel she's sadder than me!

 

 *~ Pearldiver ~

 

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Certificate 12
Poem
Nature
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Comments

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Yeah, it is kinda sad... we're s irresponsible ...

Good poem...

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

We are indeed Terry. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this piece. Glad you like it. Cheers

Submitted by love_writing on

Makes you stop and think- most people love nature yet not enough to take care of it. Thanks for sharing. 

love_writing

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Thanks for reading and commenting on this piece love_writing. Yes we humans tend to be tinged with apathy and thoughtlessness in selfish pursuit of our selfishness. Cheers, you take care

Rob

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

I feel this sentiment - we get caught up in our own woes and forget the real troubles of the world. When I remember them though, it makes me feel even more despondent. 

 

Good poem though, thought provoking.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Oh Holly, isn't that the case on most occasions across the board. Life is give and take - to not feel more despondent, give the self pity away - and take what is offered in the sadness of others (nature) as being the vehicle for your 'sacrifice.'  - Glad you liked this piece, cheers for reading and commenting with such candour

Rob