Feeling

By Beeme

Thu, 23 Jun 2011
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6 comments
 

I know the bottom she says I have seen it.
Her hands fighting to unpeel
the layers of darkness,
battling-
a birds wings rippling the air
scrambling to be free.
Maintaining her own worth;
by counting the clouds in the air
and thinking they mean something.

Certificate 12
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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
I like this Beeme- I am sure the clouds mean something ;)Pia

Submitted by Beeme on
thanks Highhat, maybe they do :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by fatboy74 on
i like this a lot. :-)

 

Submitted by seashore on
particularly like the last two lines, Beeme

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks again Fatboy, really happy you liked :-) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you Seashore their my favourite too :) Beeme xx

k.