Shapes of Love
By collegekid94
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What I like about you:
You make me smile
You stimulate me intellectually
You make bedtime very enjoyable
Your love for physical attention
You build my confidence
You can't get over me
What I dislike about you:
Your priorities
You make me anxious
Your stubbornness
Your occasional selfishness
Your belief that you aren't worth it
Your moods that you feel like you can use me as you please
You illogicalities
The cons clearly overriding the pros, I cannot understand why I still think of you in bed. I don't think of you because you're pretty. There are many girls more beautiful than you are. The answer I may be too afraid to admit; I still have feelings for you. I love you like a daughter, but I can never see you as a wife. I cannot see myself happy and living a long life with your worries constantly by my side. I do know that if you manage to grow and change, you will make one man be a really lucky person. I hope to make some girl lucky one day and I hope that once I find love again, your skin won't creep beside me at night.
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Your last line here is
Your last line here is excellent and could spawn its own poem.
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Ohh... Ouchhhh
Ohh... Ouchhhh
Are we not all creatures of habits weighed higher than their consequences?
I do hope spontaneity is never compromised by an angry inability to list its relationship value.
Interesting rant and perspective
Take care
Rob
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