Winter Wings

By D Marie

Sun, 21 Dec 2014
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The light is low

and leafless trees are

chilled to the roots under

frosted ground and

the bird gives no thanks to

the wrestling worm

mercilessly yanked from its hole.

Certificate U
Poem

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

The harsh world.  Lovely writing.

Submitted by D Marie on

Thanks Philip. Just read The City Lives, which i like, it has a nice stream. I'm the same about punctuation, sometimes feel it gets in the way.