Amanderella and the Mystery of the Crystal Aviary. Chapter 8
By Eric Marsh
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Chapter 8.
Waterfowl Marsh.
The cool draught thickened into a heavy, wet breath that clung to Amanderella’s coat like a determined sponge. The floor beneath her boots shifted from iron to something softer, springier, and suspiciously squelchy.
A sign hung overhead, dripping steadily onto the path:
WATERFOWL MARSH
(Please Accept the Damp)
(Complaints Will Not Be Acknowledged)
Amanderella took one careful step.
The ground made a noise like a boot being swallowed.
She lifted her foot.
The ground released it with a reluctant gloop.
The trail of bright feathers continued ahead, bobbing gently on the humid air. The walkway had widened into a wooden boardwalk, though several planks had warped into gentle curves, as though trying to escape the marsh below.
Amanderella moved forward.
The mist thickened. Reeds rustled. Something honked mournfully in the distance, followed by a splash that suggested a creature of great enthusiasm and very little coordination.
Then she heard it.
A soft, steady plip… plip… plip, like raindrops falling in a room where it was definitely not raining.
Amanderella paused. Another plip. Then a squelch. Then a sigh. A very damp sigh.
A figure emerged from the mist.
Mrs Honkle Puddlebream was exactly as Mr Piffleton had described: round, anxious, and perpetually moist. Her coat was soaked. Her hat drooped. Her boots squelched with every step. And wherever she walked, she left a small, warm puddle behind, as though the marsh itself were following her out of courtesy.
“Oh dear,” Mrs Puddlebream murmured, wringing out her sleeve. “Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear.”
Amanderella inclined her head. “Mrs Puddlebream, Keeper of the Waterfowl?”
Mrs Puddlebream jumped, splashing her own ankles. “Oh! Oh my. A visitor. On the boardwalk. In the Marsh. Without waterproof trousers. Oh dear.”
“I am investigating a missing snuffbox,” Amanderella said calmly. “A large bird passed this way.”
Mrs Puddlebream let out a gasp so damp it almost dripped. “It did. It did indeed. A dreadful creature. Feathers everywhere. No respect for boundaries. Or puddles. Or personal space.”
She wrung out her other sleeve. A small stream trickled onto the boards.
“It flew right over my Marsh,” she continued, voice wobbling. “Right over it! Without so much as a honk of warning. And it dropped something. Something shiny. Something that made the ducks nervous.”
Amanderella leaned in slightly. “Where did it drop it?”
Mrs Puddlebream pointed a trembling, soggy finger deeper into the Marsh. “There. Near the old feeding platform. But I didn’t touch it. Oh no. I don’t touch shiny things. They attract attention. And attention attracts… him.”
Amanderella raised an eyebrow. “Him?”
Mrs Puddlebream shuddered so hard her hat flopped sideways. “Mr Crowther. Keeper of the Corvids. He collects shiny things. He notices shiny things. And he gets… twitchy.”
Amanderella nodded. “I see.”
Mrs Puddlebream dabbed her forehead with a handkerchief that was already soaked. “If you’re going after that shiny thing, you’ll need my key. The Marsh Gate is ahead, and it sticks. Terribly. You’ll have to jiggle it.”
She rummaged in her pocket, produced a key damp enough to drip, and handed it to Amanderella with a sniff. “Mind the puddles,” she said. “They’re warm.”
Amanderella accepted the key with a polite bow. “Thank you. You’ve been most helpful.”
Mrs Puddlebream gave a watery smile. “Do be careful. The Marsh is unpredictable. And the ducks are… sensitive.”
Amanderella stepped past her, following the feather trail into the thickening mist.
Behind her, Mrs Puddlebream sighed, producing yet another puddle.
Ahead, something glinted faintly through the reeds.
The snuffbox thief had dropped something.
And Amanderella was getting closer.
The boardwalk dipped lower as Amanderella followed the trail of feathers. The mist thickened into a pale curtain, and the reeds on either side rustled with the soft, secretive movements of creatures who preferred not to be seen.
Amanderella stepped carefully. The planks beneath her boots were slick with moisture, and every few steps a warm puddle reminded her that Mrs Puddlebream had passed this way recently, or perhaps the Marsh itself was simply feeling sociable.
Ahead, a shape emerged through the mist.
A wooden platform, sagging slightly at one corner, jutted out over a pool of dark, still water. A faded sign hung from a post:
OLD FEEDING PLATFORM
(Do Not Feed the Birds)
(They Will Take Advantage)
Amanderella approached.
The feathers were thicker here, scattered in a small, chaotic burst as though the bird had paused, flapped, and argued with itself before moving on.
Something glinted near the edge of the platform.
Amanderella knelt.
It was a button.
A large, shiny button, engraved with a tiny crown.
She lifted it gently.
“From the Royal personage’s coat,” she murmured.
The snuffbox thief had dropped it, or stolen it, before flying on.
A faint ripple disturbed the water below.
Amanderella looked up.
The mist had grown darker. Thicker. The air felt cooler, as though the Marsh were giving way to something deeper, quieter, and far less damp.
A soft hoot drifted through the gloom. Then another. Then a whisper. Not a voice. A presence.
Amanderella stood, slipping the button into her pocket.
The feather trail continued off the platform and into a narrow passage where the reeds thinned and the shadows deepened.
A sign hung above the entrance, its paint peeling, its letters barely visible:
NOCTURNAL GLOOM
(Please Lower Your Voice)
(They Startle Easily)
No torches allowed.
Amanderella stepped toward it.
Behind her, something shifted, a rustle, a breath, a whisper that wasn’t quite a whisper.
A thin figure in a fraying waistcoat emerged from the drifting steam, clutching a clipboard so tightly it looked in danger of snapping. His spectacles were fogged, his hair stuck up like frightened feathers, and when he spoke, it was in a whisper so soft it barely reached her ears.
“Ah,” he breathed. “You must be here about… the disturbance. The culprit is almost certainly the… Squelch Beak.”
He whispered the name with the weary dread of a man repeatedly outwitted by the same bird.
“It was originally a Special Containment Bird,” he murmured, glancing nervously at the rafters, “but its Keeper resigned after the Incident With The Lanterns, and no one has volunteered to replace him. Hence… unassigned.”
Somewhere above them, something large gave a triumphant squawk, as though delighted to be mentioned.
Amanderella inclined her head. “Dr Gloomridge, I presume.”
He blinked once, slowly, like an owl considering its options.
“The bird passed through my domain,” he murmured. “It is a Special Containment Bird. Unassigned.”
He hesitated, then added, softer still:
“It wanders where it pleases,” he whispered. “It squeezes through maintenance gaps. It follows Keepers with feed buckets. It has learned the meal routes better than we have. Boundaries, to it, are… suggestions.”
“I thought as much,” Amanderella said.
He lifted one long, pale hand and pointed into the darkness.
“Follow the shadows,” he breathed. “They remember.”
Amanderella stepped closer. “And your key?”
Dr Gloomridge reached into his coat. Something metallic glinted faintly. He held out a key shaped like a crescent moon.
Amanderella accepted it with a small bow. “Thank you.”
Dr Gloomridge melted back into the gloom, his whisper lingering like a breath of cold air. “Do not wake them.”
Amanderella turned toward the Nocturnal Gloom.
The feather trail vanished into the darkness. And now, thanks to Dr Gloomridge, so could she.
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