The Amazing Adventure of Amanderella Gottsnobbler Chapter 11
By Eric Marsh
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Chapter 11:
Another disappointment.
The next day dawned heavy with mist. Amanderella set out once more, her string trailing behind, her notebook ready. The jungle was restless, alive with sound.
She bent low, notebook ready. From the ooze a beetle heaved itself up, glistening and slow, its legs caked with mud. It staggered forward, then collapsed back into the muck with a faint plop.
She sketched it carefully, noting its dull sheen, its weary crawl. This was no insect marching in serried ranks. Just one tired beetle, dragging itself out of the mud.
The jungle gave no answer, only a bubble rising and bursting in the mud. She closed her notebook and trudged on, the silence pressing closer, the rain dripping steadily from the leaves.
Amanderella pressed on, the jungle tightening around her. Vines looped from the trees, thick and tangled, forcing her to duck and weave. She stopped when one vine brushed her cheek — broad leaves glistening with rain.
On its surface, faint lines caught her eye. She bent closer. Letters, scratched as if by some hurried hand, curled across the leaf. It looked like Latin, but broken, half‑erased by the plant’s own veins. Gloria…vita… and then nothing, the rest swallowed by green.
She sketched it quickly, puzzled. This was no grand notice nailed to a tree, no solemn naming shouted round the fire. Just a single leaf, marked faintly.
She whispered, “So even his vines speak — but only in fragments. And I cannot tell him that it exists.”
The silence pressed closer. A drop of water slid down the leaf, blurring the letters further, until they were unreadable. She closed her notebook and moved on, the hush deepening, her knapsack heavy, her resolve thinning.
She paused beneath the canopy. A whistle rang out, sharp and strange, echoing through the leaves. Her heart leapt — could it be? She whistled back, softly, carefully. The answer came at once: a chorus of parrots, shrieking with laughter, mocking her call in bright, raucous voices. She sketched their feathers, muttering, “So even the parrots play tricks.”
Further on, the mud sucked at her boots. She bent low, tracing tracks pressed deep into the earth. Four‑toed, broad, heavy. Her pulse quickened. She followed them through reeds and roots until the creature itself lumbered into view — a tapir, snorting gently, its hide dull grey, its eyes mild. Not a monkey at all. She sighed, sketched its tracks, and whispered, “So it was only a tapir.”
She climbed a ridge, branches clawing at her sleeves. At the crest she froze. Something blue fluttered in the wind, caught in the branches below. Her breath caught — fur? At last? She scrambled down, heart racing, only to find a scrap of cloth, faded and torn, tangled in the bark. She held it up, rain dripping from its edge, and whispered, “So even the jungle dresses itself in tricks.”
She tucked the cloth into her notebook, closed it carefully, and sat very still. The parrots shrieked, the tapir snorted, the jungle rustled. Her own path was noisy, restless, alive — but the Blue Whistling Monkeys remained hidden, as if waiting for her to prove herself worthy of their song.
The rain came as it always did, sudden and heavy, drumming on leaves and filling the clearing with mist. Amanderella sat beneath her unfurled umbrella, dry in her small circle, and watched as water gathered into a stream at her feet.
The jungle seemed to laugh, parrots shrieking overhead, frogs croaking in chorus. She closed her notebook, tightened her knapsack, and sat very still beneath her umbrella , until the rain stopped.
The jungle grew louder as she pressed on. Birds shrieked, frogs croaked, snakes slid through the roots. Then, above it all, came a sound that froze her in place — a whistle, sharp and playful, echoing through the canopy.
Her heart leapt. She shaded her eyes, scanning the branches. The whistles multiplied, overlapping, rising and falling in comic chorus. Leaves shook, branches swayed. And then they appeared: a troupe of monkeys, swinging and leaping, their tails curling, their faces bright with mischief.
They whistled again, mocking her, shrill and cheerful. She sketched them quickly, her hand trembling. But their fur was brown, their faces pale, their bodies ordinary. Not blue. Not the ones she sought.
When the monkeys had appeared, the thrill surged through her veins, only to be crushed as she realized they were not the vibrant blue treasures she sought. Her heart sank, mirroring the leaves falling around her in disappointment.
She whispered, “So there are whistling monkeys — but not the ones I need.”
The monkeys shrieked louder, as if laughing at her disappointment, then vanished into the canopy, leaving only rustling leaves and fading whistles.
Amanderella closed her notebook, her knapsack heavy, her resolve thinning. The jungle had given her monkeys, but not the Blue Whistling Monkeys. Not yet.
The campfire was already lit when Amanderella returned, her string trail guiding her back through the hush of the jungle. She slipped her notebook into her knapsack, hiding the sketch of the vine.
The explorers were gathered in their usual circle, tea cups raised, voices booming.
Doctor Porridgepump thumped his fist on the table, “Not a stalk nor a seed have I found! The jungle is barren, I tell you, barren!”
Colonel Jibberjack waved his spoon dramatically, “Not a beetle stirred, not a marching band in sight. The jungle mocks me!”
Sir Humbuggle flourished a parchment, its Latin scrawls smudged by rain, “Not a vine spoke, not a syllable answered. Silence, silence everywhere!”
Lord Crankleboot tapped his cane against a stone, scowling, “Not a rock floated. They all sank like common pebbles. The jungle conspires against me!”
Reverend Tiddlewink shook his ribbons mournfully, “Not a bird sang, not a feather fluttered. My prayers are unanswered!”
Professor Thimblewhack measured the air with his tape, sighing, “Not a worm wriggled. The soil is empty, lifeless!”
Amanderella sat quietly, her knapsack closed, her notebook hidden. She had seen the rare vine, but she could not tell them.
As she listened to the grumbles of her companions, Amanderella felt a spark of determination ignite within her. She looked past the firelight, beyond the camp, into the depth of the jungle, ready to explore.
She spooned rice into her tin cup, listening to their speeches, and whispered only to herself:
“Sometimes finding nothing is part of the finding.”
The fire crackled, china cups clinked, and the jungle rustled beyond the clearing, noisy and alive, holding its secrets close.
And, as the fire died down after supper, Professor Thimblewhack carefully recorded every crumb of talk in his battered book, the day’s actions preserved beside the taste of Amanderella’s cooking.
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