Love, and other lies

By EvanescenceForever

Sun, 21 Aug 2011
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You told me you loved me.
You told me you cared.
Another to add to the list of your lies.
You can't fix a broken heart.

Cheating, and hated, and bitter with rage
Why don't you look at yourself?
Who would be willing to love you again?
You can't fix a broken heart.

Run to the other girl I never knew.
The one that you said loved you.
The one that I saw you kissing last night.
You can't fix a broken heart.

Don't try to make it better, I don't want to know.
Get out of this house, and my life.
I'm already over you, so go get your stuff.
I've fixed my once-broken heart.

Certificate PG
Poem
To love, to lose
Love

Comments

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Hello---a nice, yet sad poem. It covers all the territory of love. Suggestion---second last line: use 'getting' instead of already. And last line use: I'm going to fix my broken heart. Remember these are suggestions, and the joy of writing is finalized by the author of the work. Cheers, Richard LP AND Esther.
Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by EvanescenceForever on
Thank you very much! I'll definitely use your suggestions to help me improve :) Amy