"Short"

By francisraymondarevalo

Thu, 18 Feb 2010

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Hello my name is...
Goodbye
Dumbfounded look
As death brushed the dame
Strange, she said
He never said his name

What? said the short one
"Goodbye"
That's what I heard him say
Then that is possibly
the means of the delay

Goodbye is his name?
Goodbye is his name
I see...

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Now that I like, it reminds

Permalink Submitted by Chundar on Thu, 2010-02-18 14:02

Now that I like, it reminds me of Oddyseus blinding the Cyclops after naming himself 'Noman'

Wow! I never realised that

Permalink Submitted by francisraymonda... on Thu, 2010-02-18 14:53

Wow! I never realised that until you said it to me, and now that you said it, it does remind one's self about the story Thank you (X -Francis

Was he just passing through

Permalink Submitted by WillSimpson on Fri, 2010-02-19 13:59

Was he just passing through or was there a reason for asking his name? A lovely piece.

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Thank you ^^ , I left those

Permalink Submitted by francisraymonda... on Fri, 2010-02-19 14:09

Thank you ^^ , I left those parts out myself so readers can decide it themselves and see the story in their own perspective. (X salamat (thank you) -Francis