Pen y ffrwd – Some Thoughts

By GlosKat
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In spite of the fact that there is obviously a supernatural element, I wanted rational and consistent answers to the following questions in particular :
- Why, in all those years that Cerian and her lover sat side by side, was there no physical contact until she was ready to pass over ?
- Why could he understand her words, but she couldn't understand his, only hearing them as sounds ' the rushing of the wind, some clicking like two stones being tapped together, and finally the faint sound of bells' ?
- How could the gold charm exist physically in both worlds ?
After some deliberation, these are my answers :
- There is a transparent bridge which connects the two worlds, which comes out on the Pen y ffrwd hillside. Although he appeared to be in her world, he was actually sitting on the bridge. This was why the grass underneath him was never marked, and they could never physically touch. When she finally did feel his physical touch, it was on the two occasions when he was pulling her onto the bridge.
- He could understand her words because she was saying them in her world, and he was on a projection of his world into hers. She couldn't understand his words, as words, because at that stage she wasn't in his world at all. (Anyone else think that's a bit of a fudge ?)
- Ah the gold charm. Bit of story in itself this, so make yourself a cup of tea, turn off the phone and get comfortable
In his world (I must gave him an actual name sometime, now that Cerian is in his world and can hear it as a word), they do not mine for gold. There is a finite store, which came from somewhere long ago (maybe another story). It has the unique property in that it is the only substance which can exist physically in all worlds. It can only be borrowed and must eventually be returned. He explains to Cerian she only had the charm to tide her over, and that now she is in his world she must give it back, so that it can be melted down and returned to the communal store. Needless to say, Cerian is much miffed about this, and not inclined to hand it over.
What do you mean, I say, I only had the charm to tide me over ? To tide me over what ?
To tide you over missing Khyber.
I still miss her ! I clutch the charm, tearful.
But you don't need to miss her any more. He gives his deep, humming laugh, and reaches out to stroke my cheek.
I frown, suddenly suspicious, remembering that Khyber died in the quarter of an hour it took me to run down the hill to the vet's house and bring him back.
She was gone by the time we got back …
He nods, still humming. The bridge ends at the edge of her field. If she had been in her stable I would not have been able to reach her. After you left, I knew the end was near, so I came and sat with her, and invited her to come with me.
But you didn't tell me at the time !
How could I ? We could not speak. The best I could do was to give you the charm. And remember, I did not know that when your time came, you would choose to come with me. Or even that you would have the choice. If you had died anywhere but Pen y ffrwd, I could not have reached you… he shivers at the thought, and then his expression becomes mock stern. And you did turn me down once…
I kiss him to say sorry. Later, much later, I roll over and ask him to undo the thread at the back of my neck. I will see Khyber again, and gallop her on the Pen y ffrwd hillside forever.
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How lovely that you came back
How lovely that you came back with these reflections . It's been a complete joy to read from start to finish, including the comments and your willingness to engage with them. There is something magical seeing a story materialise like this and it makes me really happy that ABCTales is a place where it can happen - thank you so much Gloskat - not only for the story but for describing your part of the country to me - I will put it on my must visit list now!
I also love your reassurances about Khyber and the idea they'll be together once more
Please don't leave it another ten years before you come back with more writing!
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single 'f' in Welsh sounds as
single 'f' in Welsh sounds as English 'v' (or as in 'of'), double ff sounds like soft 'f' as in 'found', 'friend' etc
single 'd' sounds as English 'd'. 'dd' sounds like hard 'th' as in 'the'
So, I would pronounce Pen y ffrwd as 'pen-uh-ffrwd' (soft f, hard d) or 'pen-uh-ffrood' if that helps over the 'w'.
I suppose 'w' sounds like 'oo' in 'moon'
'y' on its own is an 'uh' sound. Sometimes in words it does take on an 'i' sound as in 'mynydd' (mountain) where the first is 'uh' and the second 'i' as in 'in' [muhnidd, with the 'dd' sounding as hard 'th' in 'the']
Rhiannon
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I've had the odd occasion
I've had the odd occasion where I've had to destroy someone's world on here because they've made an impossible scenario - it's never easy, and I only say if I think the person wants me to. Still no fun though!
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On behalf of all the editors
On behalf of all the editors - thank you! We do all try very hard not to tread on people's dreams - mostly we can tell if a writer wants constructive criticism, either because they ask, or because we know from previous asking. It doesn't always go smoothly though!
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You have thought this all
You have thought this all through brilliantly, makes reading your story even better
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