Brickie's 5-7-5
By hilary west
Mon, 16 Apr 2012
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Breezy building site
Whistling brickies ogle girls
Laughing at their cracks.
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Now this one's a bit below
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Now this one's a bit below the belt, hilary;-) Great stuff! SSS
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We all see these unpleasant
We all see these unpleasant sights....I've lost count of the number of 'creases' I have seen....amusing though!
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I see your haiku Between the
I see your haiku
Between the bricks mortar lies .
Cracks in the concrete .
From PAUL
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