find me

By icetea

Mon, 10 Oct 2011
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3 comments
 

Scooped from the depths
weeds n' all
to amount to little
or nothing.

Come find me low
come find me high
but don't leave
me either way,
to sob into my
brand new t-shirt
as you take your things and go
and so go and go
and don't come back
and leave and think
i don't want you
i don't miss you
yet i do.

Certificate U
Love

Comments

Submitted by fatboy74 on
I like this very much - feels throwaway but is anything but. Do you want three alls in the first section? Enjoyed :-)

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
I liked this A lot said in a short piece.
ScoZen

Submitted by icetea on
cheers! No three all's is quite possibly a couple of all's too many