Of All Things

By JoseHdz

Tue, 12 Apr 2011
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10 comments
 

I am drunk typing
On this laptop
Who knows what time
The next bus will arrive
Yesterday seems serene
The light
Reflects monotone
The insides of medieval
Churches
Along the river
Spots of sunshine
Sufficient to say
Of all things
The frankness of form
Somewhere
Pierre Reverdy
Is laughing
Two to one ratio
And you are
Prettier than
The stars

Certificate U
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Something so simple and beautiful about that phrase: And you are prettier than the stars. I really enjoyed this Jose and it is so good to see you back. :-)

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
thank you! glad that line stood out to you.. good to be back! cheers, jose.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Agree entirely with fb too, Jose. Wonderful stuff;-) Tina

 

Submitted by shoe on
I especially like the imagery in the middle and that almost naive ( I mean that in a good way!) line FB picked out. lovely.

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
thank you all. glad this experimental poem went over well w/u all! cheers, jose.

Submitted by Dynamaso on
Experimental it may be but I like it a lot.

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
thank you. appreciate it! cheers

Submitted by Beeme on
I'm sorry for my belated praise. I really enjoyed this, the last view lines in particular are very beautiful :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by JoseHdz on
it's okay, a late comment is better than no comment :) glad you liked this one, Beeme.. cheers, Jose.

Submitted by JoseHdz on
poem published in BlazeVOX12, FALL 2012.