Flying through the air (I.P.)
By Kahdai
Fri, 24 Dec 2010
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You shouldn't
go out
on the ice-slushed roads
on two wheels
with an engine in the middle,
its dangerous
and too much fun.
You might worry
for
your mental state
if you laugh
when you know
you are going to go
flying through the air!
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A lovely little ditty,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A lovely little ditty, Kahdai! But the roads really are treacherous this time of year - but I love your poem's attitudes, you never know whether to laugh or cry!
Magic xxx
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This really made me smile,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This really made me smile, Kahdai. Many a true word is spoken in a poem;-)
T ;-)x
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Yes you have to beware of
Yes you have to beware of the icey roads. Nice little poem
;)Pia
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