slit wrist sky
By keleph
Fri, 27 Jun 2008
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Beneath slit
wrist sky scampers
the empty wretch.
Hunting down a Rothko Door
between black-void alleys.
Foul stench pools of blood fleck
his grime embroidered
rags and dregs of thought.
Clicks
The clicks and clacks of drawing back
The latch;
the boot-thread thuds on his flat door.
He is dragged, ploughed through
Dirt amid fangs, claws, wild death throws, screeches - and screams.
Cracked head on cobblestone
Echoes in the hollow note of mice.
Stale and dead eyes mask the
lust of the throng.
Steady hands pound bullet after bullet into his body. Chipping bone, burning flesh and
Breaking slate.
Red seeps around black cobble;
The opening of a Rothko Door
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I'm not sure I was that keen
Permalink Submitted by onemorething on
I'm not sure I was that keen on the Rothko door aspect of this as it didn't do anything for me poetically. I understand that you're an artist though! There are loads of lines and images I love in this though in themselves - excellent writing. 'Echoes in the hollow note of mice', for example and 'his grime embroidered rags and dregs of thought'.
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