Shopping to Excess - (2025 Remix)
By mark p
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Sunday , still November
Urban urchins, Doric divas,
Tik-Tok toerags, Facebook fops
from tenement flats and tower blocks
all descend, upon the city
to shop!
Fists full of credit cards
Christmas cowboys heft heavy bags of prospective presents
on a wild east main drag, closed for repairs.
A thrashing throng of thrusting limbs
twist amidst the thrum of swarming shoppers fighting for attention
as the self checkout has checked out!
Yuletide jeers from Christmas village
Carnival riding, festive feasting- distant sounds
of Mariah's wishing dulcet tones, drowned out
by the beep and cheep of thousands of I-phones!
(An updated , remixed version of a poem I wrote years ago)
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Black Mariah
Mariah's wishing dulcet tones, drowned out
The day wasn't all bad then?
Turlough
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