.6 life in pastels

By cigarettes and scribbles

Sun, 28 May 2017
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A minimalistic caricature of your living room

in pastel blues, pinks and greens. 

The saxophone oozing from the radio hi-fi

dancing to the rhythm of the gentle drums and bouncing bass. 

Close your eyes everything turns into pastel,

elegant, simplistic and bright. 

Sounds turn into a smooth ambient fusion 

Of synth and jazz.  

Pastel blues, pinks and greens,

the landscape of a quiet Sunday afternoon. 

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Just love Jazz fusion and this summed up a perfect way to spend a Sunday.

I love the picture too.

Thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by cigarettes and ... on

Thank you Jenny 

 

Submitted by jolono on

You use two words in this that could easily describe the poem itself...elegant and simplistic. I was chilling out just reading through it. Really nice and thoroughly enjoyed.

 

Submitted by cigarettes and ... on

Thank you so much

 

Submitted by Rosie Sumner on

This piece possesses a very hypnotic and harmonious quality. The lack of a rhyme scheme certainly works in this poem's favour by creating a leisurely and casual atmosphere. The colour scheme associated with the poem entwined with the beautiful imagery administers a predominant sense of wonderful yet vaguely otherworldliness that Sunday evenings seem to possess, as if one really was lost in another realm; it's an absolutely stunning piece! This is certainly an amazing perception of a relaxed, subdued Sunday evening.