Real Dreams
By Natalia
Wed, 24 Jul 2013
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He softly sings
a medley in her ear
Words flow, fluidly
like a fresh water spring
Stories and poems
she hears, in her
star-attired world
of hopes and dreams
She falls into a lull
Pictures appear
and disappear as
she drifts away
It is a land
where she can fly
high above the mountains
and far across the seas
Slowly, he stops
but she does not awake,
for few are the dreams
which are not real
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Lovely Natalia. One point,
Lovely Natalia. One point, should "Pictures" (second line, third stanza) be capitalised?
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Oh, I like this especially
Oh, I like this especially the last stanza. Magic! Pure magic!
Well done
Moya
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