Shut-down

By Parson Thru

Tue, 27 Nov 2012
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The engine shuts down
and there is silence

No sense of motion

Just an emptiness
where once had been something

Lights glow
and occasionally flicker

And I know
that something has come to an end

This is shut-down
right on the money

Certificate U
Poem
Parson Thru II
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
I think I agree with Bear- let the silence reign. poignant is my word for it. Clarity.. ;)Pia

Submitted by Parson Thru on
You are so right. Thanks both. It's one of those wringing your head out ones bashed into my phone on the train when everything around seems not worth the effort. I wasn't sure about that line but could have layered on even more. Thanks for the good advice.

Parson Thru

Submitted by denni1 on
Bashed out on yer phone .. you shood write about writing like that xx

Submitted by Parson Thru on
I've run out of anything else to say, so why not. Cheers denni. Nice to hear from you.

Parson Thru