The confluence of word and sound

Cherry

By Poette

Tue, 02 Feb 2016
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When koto strikes through stony moss garden 
waves lavish heart space 
to give much-needed release.

All talk entails a poetry
-suggesting inciting vibrating inviting-
a composite overlay
where response is a defray.
Meaning trails at the mind’s membrane,
like our chat last night across your kitchen table.

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Comments

Submitted by VeraClark on

This is beautifully done.

 

Submitted by torscot on

Agree with VC on this gentle tale  '...beautifully done..."

I often visit a small zen garden not far from me, very peaceful and quite, but the next time I'm there

I shall wish for the sound of the koto.

 

 

torscot

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

Wonderful, loved 'suggesting inciting vibrating inviting' and 'meaning trails at the mind’s membrane'

 

Submitted by Poette on

thank you so much for such lovely comments and cherries - totally unexpected!